The overall outcome of Silent Disco was good, and there are lots of strong points to take from it. That said there are lot of things to learn from and take in to my next films. I was pleased with my personal performance although there were some things i could have improved, and aim to in future productions.
Location research being the first. I was really happy with some of the locations i managed to find, including Hannahs bedroom for the first scene (as seen below). The main reason i chose this room was because of its length, with the idea of using
pull focus's as mentioned in my earlier blog
Shooting Day 1 - Thursday 3rd March 09. But also because it was a nice space, and a clear girls bedroom. The sound was difficult to get at points, but after editing I decided to cut the sound from the first scene completely as in the feedback we were told it wasnt ultimatly clear she was deaf. This works really well and is a strong intro to the film, especially combined with the deaf sound (which will I talk about later on).
But I feel like some of the others could have been a bit better. In particular the party scene. The room it's self and lay out were really good, but i feel like it was kind of let down by the amount of extras. After reading the script etc and planning, I think we were all under the impression it was going to be an actual party scene, rather than a gathering, so i went out with the intention of finding a big open plan down stairs to fit lots of people and fill out. So with that in mind i didn't really focus on the location of the fridge. I think a better location for this scene would have improved it a lot, one with the front room separate from the kitchen. We then would have less problems with light during the fridge scene as well. Also more extras would have made the scene look more authentic, but unfortinatly we were let down on the day or very near to it by the majority. Although i think I did a good job of making the party scene look lively, and we did well fo fill the space with the amount of extras we had. And the choice of music really speeds up the pace of this scene.
The party scene was amoung the hardest, and most tedious to film. On the second day of shooting we shot all day, with the fridge scene being the last. The original script had alot more fridge sentences than we decided to shoot on the day. This was mainly down to a lack of variety in the shots and we thought it would be better to be concice, than cause the scene to drag. As this was the last thing we filmed at the end of a long day everyone started to get tired and this attitude was quickly reflected in our work rate, and enthusiasm. After reviewing the footage, and the rough edit it was clear this scene needed to be reshot. This was a good decision and although not everyone could attend the footage was alot better that the first time round. It was also easier to make it better because myself and Ed were able to write up a list of shots we had missed, new ideas, and ultimatly things to get and we could learn from what we didn't do in the first place, and reviewing the footage. (this list can be found
here)
The music for the Party scene was a track by
Fred V. I think it was a good choice and fits the scene well. During the edit i contemplated
EQ'ing the sound to make it as if it was in the room. I tryed it out and could get it sounding good by cutting out a large amount of the high and low frequencys, and adding slight reverb. But as I progressed in the edit i realised the sound from the scene its self wasnt great, and there were some points where the wild track wouldnt fit the image, especially the sweeping shot of the party because i wasnt able to follow with the boom so we didn't have a good sound recording for it. So i decided to scrap that and mute all the
diagetic sound and just run the music as a soundtrack instead. I think this works well but after watching the finished edit back, i think its hard to tell whether the track is meant to be diagetic or non diagetic, due to the fact i used fades and cuts during deaf sounds etc. looking back i wish id just used the
EQ'ing i constructed and used low quality sound for the scenes themselves, with the wild track laid over. After fiddling around with the cue points in the track and cutting it to fit, i was able to align the drop with the start of the sweeping shot. I feel this gives the party scene a lot of impact and i was really happy with its placement, regardless of how its EQ'd. The POV shot's were something we talked about in pre production and i was really keen on doing as it would really reinforce the fact shes deaf, and show the audience the world from her POV. I created the deaf sound using
Logic Pro using a sign wave, playing a C# and pitching it up 3 semitones. The sound came out nicely and i was happy with how it accompanied the image. I originally was planning on using a low pass filter on the diagetic sound so that it came through out the deaf sound as dull, distant thuds. But after trying this it didnt really cut through in the audio mix, so collectively myself and Ed chose not to use it. Looking back i wish I'd spent longer doing this, and maybe played around with pusing up the gain to help it come through in the mix, as i think this would have added some depth to the POV shots instead of just hearing a ring.
Overall i was happy with the finished edit, and the way myself and Ed worked throughout. Dan's rough edit was a good basis to start doing a final edit and a plan the sound (a list of things I planned to do with the rough edit can be found
here) From this i was able to amend and cut down the film, and also start to get an idea of sound and plan it with Ed. I Loosely cut the film down as much as i could without the re shoot footage, leaving enough space/time roughly judged from the first take's, to put it in after. The reshoot went really well, as there were a lot less people, and myself and Ed had had time to go away and think about shots and plan for it, and because we knew the space i think it made it easier. So it was alot more focused and not as much pressure to rush as there was before. The new footage fitted quite well and I thought i did a good job of merging the different shoots together. Looking back i wish we had made her speech more muffled and not so clear when she says 'im deaf'. Becasue in the current edit we know whats said, and it seems silly that he wouldnt either. Although the intention was to show him not understanding her, and then her showing him on the fridge. But in the current edit, it looks like she tells him twice. There were also issues with Chris's acting in response to this. It was overdramatic in both shoots and even after telling him plenty of times in the second shoot he continued to do so. This is something i really wish we had changed and done more and more takes until he got it right.
I was really happy with the groups performance and think we worked well as a team. Everyone carried out their roles well and supported each other through out. The main things i will take forward from this are: Lighting, this project has really highlighted to me lighting every scene possible is important, and is something I had underestimated until now. without decent lighting even a nicely framed, and exposed shot will be degraded. EQ'ing music or making a clear divide between it being diagetic and non diagetic, this is something i fell down on in this film in places, and will defiantly look to improve in the future. And also location research, In future I will aim to go to the locations with the director before hand to plan the shoot. Rather than turn up and think it all up on the spot. This was proven in the reshoot - because we both new the space already it was so much easier to plan ahead of the shoot. And if we had done this for every scene I'm certain the overall outcome would have been higher. I feel as if i have leant a lot from the 2 films on this module, working in slightly bigger groups means you've got to work harder for your team as well as your self and I aim to take forward all these points in to my 3rd year.
Here is the finished edit: